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~ Jab hum Mile ~

By: astrofreak1234 | Posted Jun 11, 2010 | From My Heart | 1579 Views

Maine poocha Padosi ko kya meet par aaoge

Padosi ne kaha haan haan

Zaroor aaonga yeh batao aur kisko bulaoo

Maine kaha ek Dp chhapo

Padosi ne DP chhapi

Aur usmein chhaape naam

Aur tai kiya hua mukaam

Meet ke din pahunche sabse pehle Mala aur Tiya

Phir Mala ne kiya mujhko fone

Tanna batao tum kahan ho

Maine kaha yehi hoon, aati hoon bas

Main udkar pahunch gayi Mala ke paas

Mala aur Tiya se milkar baton mein magan hui

Pata nahin Tiya kab jaakar mere liye Icecream layi

Main icecream kha rahi thi usi waqt aaya Padosi ka fone

Tum chupi ho kahan hum dhoondh rahe hain yahan wahan

Maine Mala se kaha main laati hoon un maharathiyon ko

Maine duur se hi pechaan liya Harry, Ketan aur Fenil ko

Hello hi hello hi karte karte sambhali apni kursiyaan

Phir kisme itna dum tha humko bolne se rokta

Shuru hui hamari chapad chapad

Phir ek fone aaya

Dobara wahi prashna dohraya gaya

Maine aas paas nazar daudayi

Dekha koi ghabraye huae sharmaye huae

koi kisi ko dhoondh raha hain

achanak uske kaano mein meri awaaz pahunchi

kisi ki nigahe upar uthi, koi ek pal ruka

mujhe laga ab who wapas jaane ko palta

aakhir usko hamari kashish kheench layi

hamari mehfil mein nayi roshni aayi

baithe gupshup karte lagi achanak garmi

ui ui karte humne jagah badly

thodi iski tareef thodi uski burayi

kardi humne sabki tabiyat saaf

kuch ko apne shor se duur bhagaya

maine dekhi ghadi ki suiyaan

joh apni tez rafter se thi daud

maine kaha ab mujhe kaho alvida

mujhe jaana hain kayi flyover ke paar

kisi ne ek na meri chalne di

bada sa lalach dekar chup baitha diya

Kuch pal beetein phir hui fone mein hulchul

Who aa hi gaye jiska tha intezaar har pal

Akash aur Nidhika ki Nanhi si pari (Archisha)

Ki muskaan ne moh liya har kisi ka dil

Ek baar phir shura hua milne milane ka daur

Hui aur kuch gupshup, meri nigah gayi ghadi par chhup chhup

Phir jaanewaale ko kaun rok sakta hain

Mere alvida kehne se ek baar phir hui hulchul

Sab karne lage apne daanton ki numaish

Ek bijli jhapki aur hum ko qaid kar gayi

Sab se milne milane ka silsila hua

Phir dobara milne ka waada hua

Phir yaad dilaya ki meri Icecream ab bhi udhaar hain

Sabki zimmedaari Padosi ke kandhe par rakhkar hui rukhsat

Aage ka haal doosre friends ki DP mein padhe. I had to leave the Meet halfway due to something unavoidable. All of them were good sports and will surely meet them again. Earlier I had met only Akash and Nidhi, I met the rest of them for the first time but I don’t think that anyone of us felt that we were meeting for the first time. A big Thank you to all those who could attend and to Raj for calling us. Hoping to meet more friends in next meet.

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kdrocks

Jun 11, 2010 10:24 PM

Hey,this is a superb poem written very uniquely.Just too good.You have given a very good poetic account of the meet.Just enjoyed reading it.I am thankful to all of you to have made this meet very homely and memorable.Looking forward to see all of you soon.Keep writing.Cheers and God bless all....Read More

astrofreak1234

Jun 11, 2010 10:28 PM

Thanks for liking the style, I had written another DP which I scrapped right away. I am glad we finally met and also thankful to you all for coming all the way....Read More

Bee123

Jun 11, 2010 11:51 PM

Maza aa gaya janam...i visualized all of this.. next time mujhe samy se bata dena... mai pahunchi samjho...

maaz_nawaz

Jun 12, 2010 12:12 AM

Dear Tanna very beautiful lines on friends meet. Unique & interesting. Please remember your last lines...Hoping to meet more friends in next meet....

Sidz_B

Jun 12, 2010 12:15 AM

Ekdum Tangy Poem thi! :P
Velly nice.. Ghalibni! :) hehe! :)

Mast tha aapka andaaz, mast the aapka saaz...
Hum bhi kam nahi hai, thode hi ayenge baaz? :)

Jab aapne sunayi hai to apne ratan ke lafz bhi jhelo
Sab MSians ko meri taraf se. Love dipped, Helllo! :P

:))))
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suraaz

Jun 12, 2010 08:11 AM

tanna didi, a very wonderful dp here....

truly speechless!
loved reading it
thanks for the wonderful post here...
regards...
suraj
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JaveedAhmedM

Jun 12, 2010 08:30 AM (Updated Jun 12, 2010 08:35 AM)

What a Poem/Song!!! Twist to the Song...Maine Poocha Chand se.... Which other Songs did U Re-Mix? LoL

This a Very Unique way of describing your meet. Well Done, Only You could have done this. Harry has invented a new way of calling for and describing meets and You have found yet another way...Poem.. LoL

"Sab karne lage apne daanton ki numaish" Well I can pass on the fone number of a Dentist...LoL

Kya bath hai....

Anyways Thanks for the Poetic Way of sharing the events of the meeting...

Psst. As Such Meri Hindi bahut Kamzoor hai..Can I have a Translation Please...LoL
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Raj_onlyone

Jun 12, 2010 09:48 AM

Chhapa to chhapa
aisaa chhapa
ke sabko lapet liyaa

A unique way Tanna
Nice one

lovesreading

Jun 12, 2010 10:04 AM

a very inique way of describing the meet. Even glad to know that unlike a lazy me, you are active in MS.

deepak27

Jun 12, 2010 02:14 PM

Thats a very innovative way of sharing infor about the meet through a poem. Really nice. Good to know that you have all had a wonderful time.

khulamunh

Jun 12, 2010 02:44 PM

Wonderful account...exact clock work precision ke saath. I really loved this rendition...this is for sure a novelty for describing the meet..KUDOS!

confusedsoul

Jun 12, 2010 03:18 PM

Kamaal ka account diya!
Wah wah..! Just Awesome!!

Meet ka haal sunkai dil ko khushi hui..
Aur bhi meets aap ko naseeb ho iski dua nikli.. :)

Have a great weekend.
Take care

~$@M~
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astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 05:57 PM

aap jab bhi aao, hum meet arrange kar lenge. Post ko like karne ke liye thanks :)

astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 05:57 PM

Thanks for liking it, I know that I have trapped myself by writing those lines.:D

astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 06:00 PM

Arre tum har waqt Tangy Tangy bolte rehte ho, udhar Rhimjhim naraaz hain ki uska koi naam nahin leta.

Aapka andaaz bhi nirala hain
sabko lafzon ke jaal mein daala hain
jab apna sir okhli mein daala hain toh phir kya darna :P
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astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 06:01 PM

Thanks for the praise
Thanks for liking it
Thanks for joining us in making this Meet a success.

oops I better stop my list now :D

astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 06:13 PM

So you did guess the free verse is based on songs, I think no one else noticed it. You are right there are several songs that I used.

I am unique, so I will write it in an unique way :P

We have plenty of dentists here but thank for the offer.

Yeh Dp likhte likhte hi haalat kharab hogayi, a translation bhi karwaoge, kya bachchi ki jaan loge :P

Psst..Tumhari hindi agar maine sudhari nahin to apna naam Tannu se Tanna kar loongi
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astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 06:22 PM

Koshish hi thi sabko lapetne ki

Thanks for liking it. I wrote it in ordinary way with a little humour added to it but since I didn't like the final outcome, I wrote it in this way.BTW I have used some songs as the base as Jams already pointed out.
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astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 06:22 PM

I am more active on FB than on MS, thanks for liking this unique specimen :)

astrofreak1234

Jun 12, 2010 06:25 PM

We really had a wonderful time and thanks for liking the poem. Did you read my reply on Harry's Photo album? I have written a typical Gunda style comment :)...Read More

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