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Fragment of Fragrance- (part-1)

By: suraaz | Posted Oct 17, 2009 | diary | 1116 Views | (Updated Oct 17, 2009 01:32 PM)

Fragment of fragrance

It was a sweet rose. Yeah, apparently rose are considered to be sweet and they have its own existence in the kingdom of flowers, but even in the presence of beautiful queen and king, they are given that super symbol which plays vital role in thereconciliation of relation.

This time it was a red one, which is given a designation of “symbol of love”. Before this, I had plucked lots of white ones on the initial days, and then as distance of our relation got on decreasing, I transformed my environment to decorate with the color of longest wavelength. She used to love being salaried her presence by red-rose, and so I was addicted of giving this wonderful gift to most beautiful girl of my life. No matter, how sharp were throne below its petal, I never expressed pinch of its point with anyone, just to be pleasured by her smile. Earlier that day, I never expressed any thoughts of getting that small beautiful component nor did I do it that day, because I believed I was accompanied with entire source of beauty in form of my seraph.

That day, her sight was caught by ‘that reddish object’, she herself determined to give it for me. As she went on to pluck it, she was hurt by the sharpies’ throne, and a very indifferent tune was produced from her. By the time, that fragrance producer was already separated from its stem to be crumbled on the ground, still being myself unable to resist her pain; I pressurized that rose (my onetime dearest love post man) to fragment it into pieces. I never objected hundreds of such pain I had faced, but her one small pain, I couldn’t resist it, and since then I never used it, I never plucked it and I never enjoyed its fragrance, just because I never wanted her to feel that pinch even in her dream.

The purpose of writing this incident is not to bore you people again by my uncompleted love story, but here I want to compare my view on the rose with yours…

People say, rose gives happiness, even I have also experienced this on the earlier phase. But the thing which I couldn’t understand it, why it is enriched with throne? If it was with the principle of giving smile to our loved one, even let it be for a mini-second when its throne kisses any part of our body why do it hurt most? Is it that all the people who use rose gets hurt by its throne? Even I was suffered lot from it, I never had any question for its attitude. But why did I start to ignore this universally loved living material? Just, because it had hurt some special person of my life?

I don’t know what you might be thinking to my silly question, but the last one! If u think rose is the symbol of peace and love, will war and quarrel be stopped if we show this rose in front of two enemies?

Yeah, u might be hurried to comment me “as fool” but I have a different type of answer today…

Yes, throne of rose would have never given pain to my girl if she had used it with all her sensitive and care. If she had used it with awareness and if she had asked me the procedure of plucking up flower, she would have never got that pain... Thought that rose is innocent here,still I hate it.

Rose is representative of love, and even of peace. It is accepted by all, still I am among the very few who ignore it because it had given pain to my love. I still hate it because I can’t resist pain observed by my love ones.

Yes, rose is the symbol of love and peace. But it doesn’t mean in its presence, it will stop the war and quarrel in the entire world. It must be human itself who have to be resolute for the peace. It must be themselves who have to choose between war and peace. It must be the human who should choose love and disgust to their neighbors.

Still Either that be on war, or either that be on park of love, this rose will share out heavenly aroma to all from its best

Till its last breath..

to be continued:----

https://mouthshut.com/diary/geafusqso/Fragment-of-Fragrance-part2

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hermit

Oct 17, 2009 01:36 PM

Interesting - moving to part 2

suraaz

Oct 17, 2009 01:41 PM

thank u so much for your early comment and presence in my post..

my last 150th post had inspired me to write this one..

thanks brother..

regards..
suraj...
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viratbond

Oct 17, 2009 01:41 PM

Hi Suraj,
In one word: brilliant!! I'm guessing this is inspired by a real love story in your life?? Then again, I might be wrong.

Anyway, that's not the point. I esecially liked where you took the idea - a simple incident representitive of Humanity :)

The thorn analogy was very well used. We humans are emotional people. Our rationale is clouded by our emotions. We try to protect those whom we care about and don't want to see them get hurt. The destruction of civilisation is not due to war, naah! It is due to negligence, negligence when there is... peace.

We try so hard to protect what we have, what we value, that we sometimes forget the reasoning behind our actions. This was very well explained through the fact of reasoning - that if the girl would have known how to avoid the thorn, she would not have got hurt. Yet, our emotions take control, thus, you still hate the rose, even though there is no fault of the rose in this incident! The protection of rose itself is the thorn. So the rose was protecting itself while you were protecting the girl!!

Great post!! No, Awsome post!
Kept me engrossed..
Moving on to Part 2 :)
Love
Virat
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Ajay_1977

Oct 17, 2009 02:04 PM

very good one.
Just brilliant........
Moving to the 2nd part

Paulsb02

Oct 17, 2009 02:47 PM

Good write up there...

Virat's comments tells a lot

Let me read the next too...

suraaz

Oct 17, 2009 08:24 PM (Updated Oct 17, 2009 08:27 PM)

thanks for your beautiful words of encouragment...

well, that might be the philosophy but more, its my personal feeling to connect something on second part...

yeah, our emotion hurts us... and we do search good days in our life....

thanks for beautiful comment for which i dont have any thing to express..

regards..
suraj..
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suraaz

Oct 17, 2009 08:25 PM

glad to know that u liked the post...

and thanks for visiting here..

regards..
suraj....

suraaz

Oct 17, 2009 08:28 PM

thanks for your writing here....

happy to see your presence in my post..
regards..
suraj..

aaryesdee

Oct 17, 2009 11:55 PM

Is very very nice post.As you said, its one of the best DP have contributed over here.
All the best.Keep penning good.

suraaz

Oct 18, 2009 12:03 AM

thanks for your kind words....

you may not feel its second part so interetsting, still thanks for your true inspiring words...

regards..
suraj....
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deeksha_dembla

Oct 18, 2009 12:03 PM

Interesting. Very good .This is the best ever diary among all.

deeksha_dembla

Oct 18, 2009 12:05 PM

Interesting. This is the best ever diaries among all.Please continue .

suraaz

Oct 18, 2009 03:44 PM

thanks deeksha for your comment and visit..

regards...

gita.madhu

Oct 19, 2009 10:06 AM

I'm afraid you (maybe all of you) would be quite upset with what I shall take the liberty of saying: While English is not our language and while I am sure that one day we shall no longer need it to communicate with each other, I take courage as an elder to say a few things to you, whom I consider as a son.
When I was young I thought there was nothing to free verse or modern art-I learned that this was not the case-the Masters mastered the rules and then broke them.
When I was young I was often told that Indians do not make an effort as they interpret the teachings of the Gita to mean ''Don't bother how you do anything as the result is not in your hands''.
As I grew older and older I,on my side, developed a thirst to be my greatest critic and to try to do my best in things-not for the praise of others but just because the unattainable goal of self perfection provides its own rewards and pleasures.
As for the wrong view of my country men and women, I realised that our many works of art, architecture, science, literature and so on, could not have been possible were there not in our spirits this thirst for perfection.
I shall read your piece and I know I shall enjoy it.
However, perhaps you would like to use the spell check application on Word?
Once the basic rules of the language are mastered, one can then break them to charming effect.
Love and Blessings
Gita
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OTEE

Oct 19, 2009 10:43 AM (Updated Oct 19, 2009 10:46 AM)

Waiting... :) moving to part-2

LOL@Gita. I too agree. :)

swiitdoll

Oct 20, 2009 04:43 AM

Its brilliant and yes superb post of them all.

Tell me when you post part 2...

suraaz

Oct 24, 2009 10:15 PM

i hope u wont mind if i say u aunty as u have called me as 'son'

thanks for sharing such a nice experience by you..
yeah, english is not our langauge...
i know only simple english..

regarding spelling mistakes, it is not my mistakes..
but, MS application is itself not perfect and there used to arise many spelling mistakes earlier if we edit the post...

thanks that there is not such problem now........
but still, MS need to improve in its application....

thanks for your words and comment here...
regards
suraj..
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suraaz

Oct 24, 2009 10:24 PM

thanks for enjoying the post...

i hope u had good time..
regards..
suraj...

suraaz

Oct 24, 2009 10:34 PM

nice to see your presence in my post....

but my friend,
did u really read this post?

because here is given the link of same part 2 post...

get it when u are free..
regards..
suraj..
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